Knockin on heavens door (my version)

umm always loved this song...but didnt like the lyrics very much,they didnt seem to stick to the concept...so i wrote muh own version of it which goes like :-


Lord please take this life from me,
I aint laughin anymore.
The doors of hope seem closed on me,
and so im knockin on heavens door....

"hey hey hey hey!"
knock knock knockin on heavens door...
Knock knock knockin on heavens door....
knock knock knockin on heavens door.

Lord will you take my dad and mom?
will the devil take me down today?
Coz i have been a bad son,
and it seems ive forgotten how to pray...

"so hey hey hey hey!"
knock knock knockin on heavens door...
Knock knock knockin on heavens door....
knock knock knockin on heavens door.

Lord id give this life up,for free,
the deceptions have made my heart go sore.
And your the only one thats understood me,
So im complaining and tear-ing at your door...

knock knock knockin on heavens door...
Knock knock knockin on heavens door....
knock knock knockin on heavens door.

Lord the freinds that said theyd be,
Have now found others besides me.
The girl i said that i would love,
treats what i say with just a shrug.

knock knock knockin on heavens door...
Knock knock knockin on heavens door....
knock knock knockin on heavens door...



So Lord when you see me,
knelt down head on the floor.
Im beggin you to free me,
my heart knock,knockin on heavens door..
"hey hey hey hey!"....

- Saad Merchant